Seven Seas

you're just a pirate girl

your ship never docks

setting sail for lonely hearts

in a cold barren sea.  

 known to drink a pint or two

but never to walk a blank

steady as she goes,

she always knows

knowledge 

bless her little stars

always get you far

 good catch

sea worthy 

enjoys the moon light

But never afraid,

of what the wind may bring.

Because she's has heart,

and the seven seas,

is where,

 She always stay port. 

bless her heart.

 

Author's Note

To a dear friend who helps the homeless and people. she a strong little lamb.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Your words are loving and appreciative here, Mauricio. Plus, you've used your own special phrasing ~ here comparing your darling with the come and go of time and sea, ever moving, but ever there ~ perhaps to purefy or wash away past hurt in all its forms, ' .. her little stars ~ always get you far ~ good catch ~ sea worthy ~ enjoys the moon light ~ But never afraid,. .. ' seems she's wise too. Finely written, sir.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Emma she a good friend its the reason why I'm not homeless.

[emmajoy]

Seems you've found yourself an angel!

[barleygirl]

This is a beautifully original way to say "thank you" in a poem tribute! I love the affection & playfulness you impart by using the "pirate" analogy thru-out, done with skill & clever crafting! I haven't seen you around (on my newsfeed) lately & I hope you're doing well & writing with inspiration! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Poetic Beauty]

To me this is about a woman who is much like a gypsy constantly moving beating to the own drum rhythm in her heart. Fearless and loving all at the same time

[Mauricio Montoya]

wow PB you hit the nails with the words you chose for this review, yse she has move around and she a lawyer that works at an out reach program for the homeless so second her own drum yes again she bends or break a few rules to held those who are down and out and last but not less she does it out of her heart. Thanks PB like all my friend here at the café i always look forward to hear what you have to say. oxox

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you liked the way I saw this woman in your poem

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

A beautiful poem for who seems to be a beautiful person. Wonderfully penned. tyfs

[Mauricio Montoya]

hey van dyke thanks for dropping by and for the tribute to a dear friend. but most of all for the review. it helps all of us when somebody take the time to reads and a little input to make us better writes Thank you.

[Betty Hermelee]

Pirates are strong and a woman pirate is a wanderer looking for love and adventure,but perhaps hasn't yet found it. so she wanders the Seven Seas in search. She is kind and fearless. Nice content, lovely words.
Best, Betty

[Mauricio Montoya]

thank you so much for reading and ur input.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re welcome Mauricio!

[Dave Brown]

a wonderful piece for a special person
very nicely done

[Mauricio Montoya]

yes she angel likes help people out of her heart. thank you for reading