friends

friends

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
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the few

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friends
 

there are many friends 
 but few i can count on my fingers
some leave but we forget those who stay
in a world of love and hate
were close to those who cant see
and run away from those who believe
always blind from true love
we refuse to hold so dear
and when everything ends
it will be those 
who stood behind
never lost
but still our my friends.
now that love.

© 2021 Mauricio Montoya


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Nicely crafted! Great flow and also relatable.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I really like your style, it is unique. Awesome

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mauricio Montoya

2 Years Ago

Wow,thank you for reading and thanks for making my day.
Your poem points out the reality that many people spend more emotional energy on the ones that leave, rather than to appreciate the ones who quietly stay (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mauricio Montoya

2 Years Ago

Yeah all my friends I had are not here now and now that I'm older I've let to appreciate those aroun.. read more
friends come and go through life
you re blessed even if you have only
one true friend..

true friends stay with you when you
are having a hard time of it and at your
lowest point.. The others just passing through in this world of love and hate

Nicely expressed poem here

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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