Emma

Emma

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
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Just another poete

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Emma why
One write is better than the other
Not in envey
But because we love to read
Your thoughts make the world go round
If only I see I'm not alone
Not blind by the light
For now I see
Never in the dark
It's though your eyes
I've found the love
That makes you so bright
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© 2022 Mauricio Montoya


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This is so beautiful, but you seem to have two typos.
I'm pretty sure that "envey" should be envy, and "though" should be through.
However, you did a beautiful job with this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

Yeah I was drunk when I wrote it and some what embarrass because I wrote it for our Emma without ask.. read more
light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Oh ok, well she should be flattered. I dont why she wouldnt be.
As we go through life we discover an endless amount of things, but things we find because of another shine even brighter. Beautiful poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Generous and kind words for dear Emma. Thank you, Mauricio, for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

Yeah my brother she's an awesome person that rubs you the right way. Thank you for reading you're ne.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Mauricio.
"It's through your eyes
I've found the love
That makes you so bright" This is a beautiful heart felt sentiment that conveys the nature of being in love. Very nice work Mauricio. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.
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Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

It's Emma who is part of this site a great poet like you and me, thank you for great words but let u.. read more
Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

THANK YOU ☺️

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Added on April 30, 2022
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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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