Remember

Remember

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya

Such is something that goes by
If we can be reminded
Old we love thoughts
Can't think because we're loss
We want to be young
But that is forgotten
We just want to be
remember
What we lived

© 2023 Mauricio Montoya


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I believe the legacy of children is important, to leave behind parts of ourselves that we have nurtured and cherished into adults. Getting old and dying isn't so bad if we can look back with love on the memory of our children and look forward to the good they will do in the world.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

6 Months Ago

wow you're deep, yes its the future, our children, we don't



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I believe the legacy of children is important, to leave behind parts of ourselves that we have nurtured and cherished into adults. Getting old and dying isn't so bad if we can look back with love on the memory of our children and look forward to the good they will do in the world.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

6 Months Ago

wow you're deep, yes its the future, our children, we don't
the question is "will we live enough, that we have much to remember"?
And if so, will we be remembered in the end?
We can only hope...

Posted 10 Months Ago


Mauricio Montoya

10 Months Ago

Good point thank you for sharing your thoughts
I like this. It comes across ad fragmented like listening to someone else’s thoughts

Winston

Posted 10 Months Ago


Wanting to be remembered is normal, but it's also something over which we have no control. The human attention span, especially in this internet age, is short. If we have lived well, we won't need to be remembered.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mauricio Montoya

10 Months Ago

I'm not complaining, it's to the young who forget their elders, my message is remember us because on.. read more
Dear Mauricio, I can relate to your words. I too would like to be remembered in years to come. My hope is that those I have touched in life will remember an act of kindness by me and smile. Have a lovely day my friend and thank you for posting.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

Thank you for something to remember
This is my wish too. To be remembered and revered when I'm old. To be celebrated for all the good I did in my youth and for all that I stood in my life and every righteous battle I fought. Thank you for sharing such inspiring words today. Bless you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

Thank you love the Kitty that I will never forget
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome. 😀
Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

Yeah kitty's

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Added on April 6, 2023
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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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