Our Linda Amor

Our Linda Amor

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
"

earth

"

 

  towards the sky,

Hoping to touch a cloud, 

with my eyes.

There’s an abundant beauty 

the world always offers.

 I Yearn for you, 

so I can share.

what I see

 I fill my dreams of thee 

to keep me near.

 a distant heart, is empty,

 when you’re so far.

How can I come closer?

Without your sunshine

 by my side.

 The joy of  laughter fore fills me,

The present of your beauty surrounds me

There’s nothing, more which could endear me

For it’s everything I adore.

 In this Tierra Linda

It is you.

And only you.

mother earth

our linda Amor.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

 

© 2021 Mauricio Montoya


Author's Note

Mauricio Montoya
i wrote this a while back but came back to remove, replace and fix it, hope you enjoy and thank you for reading. have a great day in every time zone, lol.

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This is how I feel about the nature-abundant haven where I live. For most of this poem, I felt this was a love between two humans & I was admiring how the beloved is painted in a wide variety of attractive ways, great details (not just saying I love you becuz you make me feel good -- lame -- like so many love poems do). But then when I realized this was love between human and mother earth, that's when I really came to admire all the ways you illustrate the good feelings we can get as we love nature (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

7 Months Ago

it was and is because she no longer here but mother is the two love of my life
Mauricio Montoya

7 Months Ago

Margie thank you for read and your input.



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This lovely piece
warrants another
reading so here I
am 10 years later
reading this timeless
piece of beautiful
poetic verse
written in artistic
expression
just as relevant
as ever..

nice work

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

7 Months Ago

oh my Fran Marie once a friend when i was on the road when i back back i thought you were gone becau.. read more
Mauricio Montoya

7 Months Ago

thank you forgive the typos
  Fran Marie

7 Months Ago

Not a problem dear
friend always a
friend you are

I don't remember
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This is how I feel about the nature-abundant haven where I live. For most of this poem, I felt this was a love between two humans & I was admiring how the beloved is painted in a wide variety of attractive ways, great details (not just saying I love you becuz you make me feel good -- lame -- like so many love poems do). But then when I realized this was love between human and mother earth, that's when I really came to admire all the ways you illustrate the good feelings we can get as we love nature (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

7 Months Ago

it was and is because she no longer here but mother is the two love of my life
Mauricio Montoya

7 Months Ago

Margie thank you for read and your input.
Wonderful and amazing poetry shared my friend.
"In this Tierra Linda
It is you.
And only you.
mother earth"
I agree with the above lines. Thank you Mauricio for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

our linda Amor.

Posted 8 Months Ago


I loved the simplicity of your poem. No struggling to find some deep convoluted meaning, your meaning is clear and wonderful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet! lovely poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very touching poem I love it all the way. The love is very beautiful and the words to express it are wonderful, meaningful and beautiful. I like that you put words in Spanish I really love this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So very beautiful, soft and gentle words
A true love expressed well in a romantic verse
love the tenderness and flow and rhyme
Your words have touched the meaning of true love
And the romantic Heart!
Kudos my friend!
Wishing you a fantastic Monday!





Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm making up for reviews I haven't returned. So you may get a few from me depending :). OK, this is beautiful. She must be very speical

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is such a nice poem
I love the saying Mi Linda Amor
I took french... but I know Linda means most beautiful
mi is my
amor is love
so it's either my beautiful love or my love Linda (using Linda as a name)
either way it's a cute poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh wow, this is very sweet, I hate to admit to being emotional about flattery but if I were that girl, I would be very impressed. I love your first lines, they are a rather curious way of describing sight. Your third stanza flows very well and is very sweet. Great piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mauricio Montoya

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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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