No One's Won

No One's Won

A Poem by timbo1
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About doing what's right.

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They've won they've won they all cried out!
For I was the only one who was not done!
The only one who knew they had not won!
I screamed I kicked and fought until I knew I was the only one who had won!

© 2013 timbo1


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A bit confusing ...the last line, were you the only one who had won? Or is it meant to be written as one?
Perhaps a play on words yes? It definitely made me stop and think on it, interesting piece indeed. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on May 25, 2013
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Tags: Poetry, Poem, Moral, Fight, Right, Values, Virtues, Honor, Value, Virtue

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