Perfume

That subtle sweet, swooning the senses senseless. Memories flickering on the fringes, splashing in the shallows of liminal bays. Wading in whispers of way back whens. Forevermore ensnared within that lasting instant. Beyond the borders of time and space, it lingers on foreign shores. Waiting...

Reviews

[BBP]

Captured well. So true how a scent can take you back to a forgotten place or an awesome memory.

[tim.reed]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it!

[Inda]

this one is fantastic! i personally like when poems are structured
sort of
like this.
but other than that this piece is great. such a subtlety and tone that it is nice to read.

[tim.reed]

Thank you. I wanted it to roll of the tongue a bit.