Empty Room

Empty Room

A Poem by Tinasha LaRayé
"

when you thought love would stay forever...

"

The room is empty

But I can feel your suffering here

I can hear your tears hitting skin rolling to floor

I can feel your sorrow here

 

The room is empty

But I can smell your anguish here

I can hear salty smeared mascara crusting over on your cheeks

I can smell your torment here

 

The room is empty

But I can taste your terror here

I can hear heavy exhales throbbing through your oxygen

I can taste your misery here

 

I see your suffocation in an empty room

You once thought was full

Of love

© 2013 Tinasha LaRayé


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Such depth and emotions! This is sad, but it really touches the reader. Great write Tinasha!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tinasha LaRayé

6 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts!
Moon

6 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
This is deep!!! Passionate and very touching. Creative write, love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tinasha LaRayé

6 Years Ago

wow - thanks so much for reading and your kind words!
This is a very sad and dark piece.Sometimes we are so sad and all alone.Is there supposed to be the word "the" in the third line or did you write it this way?I really liked:P

Posted 6 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

The third line "I can hear your tears hitting skin rolling to floor " There I was wondering if it wa.. read more
Tinasha LaRayé

6 Years Ago

Oh - yes! I did mean to write it that way. By making me take a second look at it - you've given me a.. read more
Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

You are welcome,glad to help:)

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Added on December 19, 2013
Last Updated on December 19, 2013
Tags: love, relationships, hardships, rejection, abuse, break up, regret, anger, pain

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Tinasha LaRayé
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I am because my mother birthed me my father planted me my God created me. Life has unfolded for me in 29 chapters so far with two brothers a smile and a few good memories to show for it. I am because .. more..

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