bad day

...walk of faith...

“where is the passion when you need it the most?

You kick up the leaves and the magic is lost,

..you’re faking a smile with the coffee you go,

You tell me your life’s been way off line..”

 

            This is how Daniel Powter  revealed a profound inconsiderate unfulfilling phenomenon of almost seven-hundred-minute of disappointment and rejection as incorporated by such symphonic lyrical-catharsis which he preferred to  call a ‘bad day’. As the beating goes through my once-dreary-tainted-luck suddenly twisted into a glimpse of smile. Ironic. That’s all I can say after I was caught in the middle of a once-viewed perfect day slowly pissed off.

            When you wake up early, open your mail, you’ve been waiting for days, to see if you got any from your friends just to figure out there’s nothing but the emptiness itself, it’s BETRAYAL; when you hunt for job, cheered up as you can yet nobody dared to call, it’s REJECTION;  when you tried to write for W. C. and writer’s block friended you, it’s a DAMN! Life eventually goes on with or without you. But at the end of the day you’ll just end up laughing at yourself, thinking about how you’ve done silly things for silly stuff. You still got your essence, right? I’m not merely talking about existentialism here or how people exist first then finding out their real purpose later. This is more of considering the fact that there’s still a thin red line that deviates sanity from insanity and that’s what you call OPTION. Care if pain sits beside you the whole day?; or solitude embraced you for comfort; or even tears become your only glimmering accessory; the thing is, you still have the choice of just absorbing the reality itself and become passive or free yourself and walk for hope. The fact that after a day of twist and turns and listening to this absurd song, I know I do the right choice, as my lips curved to smile while this destined sonata keeps on tellin’ me, I had a  bad day.

“coz you had a bad day, you’re taking one down

You sing a sad song just to turn it around,

You work at a smile and you go for a ride

..you had a bad day…

You had a bad day…”

Author's Note

I had to write every word as my mind dictates me to, so pardon me for vague ideas, run-ons and fragments
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Reviews

[Aarontastic]

Ha, I actually like this, it's amusing. I think the run ons and fragments actually help to make it more interesting than a normal essay or something. Taking Powter's song as your point of departure, you give a really good personal account of how a bad day is like and unfolds. It makes me think, and at the end it's even uplifting, so I liked it.

[Seanne Tholltree]

all i can say is that its merely a f*****g bad day after all..tsk























darn it shn! darn it

[CHRIS ANDES]

:) that's life seanny :)

[Seanne Tholltree]

oh shn i just couldn't bear this anymore...i hate it,,why does he accuse me of destroying his f*****g cp when in fact i just sat on his chair..tz pinagsisigawan niya eh ung mga nakarining bka maniwala bti mga tentacles,,bti mn c bluettooth i caught her smirking with the other tntacle,,as if ako tlga ung nkasira..i hate it in here..merde

[mhaie]

having bad day is normal. Good, you just spend writing to express what you truly feel.

[Undying Glory]

nice work here, you've written well in this chapter. those raw thoughts translate quite well to writing on this occasion which is always really good :)
and putting the lyrics here complete the chapter well. great job!

[Jason]

Nice job, I really enjoyed reading this, keep up the good work. :)


100/100

[StarNinja]

So you took a song and you wrote a chapter about it? I'm confused. Unless this is a book of prose (poetry), in which case it all makes perfect SENSE. No grammar issues that I could see. Overall good job.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks for reading =]

[Japanese Cherry]

Nice job. I enjoyed reading this...

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you =]

[Japanese Cherry]

You are very welcome

[Max_E_Stone]

Very nice! Your words paired up very nicely. Nothing vague at all to me. It was a great read!

[CHRIS ANDES]

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[Rhea752]

nicely done

[CHRIS ANDES]

t.y =]