My Queen

12-14-12

you're my soul
my humor and light
who paints a smile
whenever I frowned,
who kicks my butt
whenever I'm down,
who gives such love
that I so desire.

your soft touch
retells a sweet dream,
your eyes glimpse
a thousand memories
though I'm cold at times,
you showed life's real color,
you're a true sonata,
I forever sing untired.

let these words
remind you
of the promise
we keep in all eternity
a chain of friendship
and love
with you my angel so bright.

I still remember
when I got home from school
you always wait for me
to come in through the gate door,
or the times you wanna play
just like sayin' you're the one to stay
in every hour of solitude
when pain is my food.

when morning shines on the 14th
thought there were no wearies
as what I said on my prayers
but it wasn't that way
coz you leave me halfway
life's but a tragedy
as you died on my
BIRTHDAY.

hope, I still behold
coz my tears seem to
 FALL
knowin' that I'm all
ALONE
now and forever
I will see you no more.

-musicfunk-           

Author's Note

this is for my one and only Queen
december 14, I woke up with her jumping and waving her tail as if greeting me..but when I got home from school
she's already dead due to high blood pressure
and it so break my heart that I came up with this poem as a tribute to her precious existence =]

Reviews

[Shannon Leigh]

I wrote a poem when my dog died as well, he was my best friend from when I was five until I was 16, so I can understand how you must have felt. This was touching and beautiful. I felt the emotions swell as the poem went on. Great work. I absolutely loved this{:

[shunik]

thank you =]

[Jock Engelman]

A painstaking story that even makes my emotionless heart pang for an instant

[shunik]

thanks my friend :)

[Tunder]

I think reading this broke my heart. I'm so dearly sorry for your loss.

[Kaylor Mason]

My heart started hurting as I read this . . . I've lost pets like this too. Too many of them . . . it never gets any easier; they're family

[shunik]

=]

[Max_E_Stone]

I felt your heartbreak just reading this! Absolutely touching!

[shunik]

I actually was crying while writing this

[fireblossom]

This is a song of tribute. A wonderful heartfelt lyric worthy to be heard. Well done.

[shunik]

thank you =]

[Relic]

It's so sad to lose a pet but that must have been really hard. This is a great heartfelt poem and tribute. I've had pets before and it's never easy to lose one. Nice writing.

[shunik]

thanks for the review
=]

[Relic]

Welcome.

[Barbara Walker]

It's so hard to lose that unconditional love that our dogs heap upon us. We can do no wrong in their eyes and they accept us, warts and all. Your words are a loving tribute.

[shunik]

thanks barb =]

[mhaie]

so sad and touching.

[shunik]

thanks again =]

[Savior of Time]

This is so sweet. I'm sorry that she died :( She is adorable, and I can bet you that she still loves you, just as you love her. Amazing poem. :)