In My Head

In My Head

A Poem by christine zapanta andes

In my head
there came a knock
a huge black cloud
known as PAIN
cracking and thunderin'
to get in...

gettin' over my heart and soul
suffocating that yellow sunshine
with such dark memory
known as PAST...

until suddenly it melts,
started to drop and drop...
...and drop...
slowly fallen like rain.

I don't know why
but that knockin' stopped ...
..turned into beats of the drum.

Rain is a violin singing ..
..makin' me FLOAT
....STARE
....LISTEN
...and SMILE..



and there was you...
........
..............I mean LIFE.



-musicfunk-  






         

© 2013 christine zapanta andes


Author's Note

christine zapanta andes
..probably a product of happy memories,
just being glad discovering things
...start appreciating life and you'll see =]

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You have a very delicate way with words that's very in depth and amazing. They're like soft petals from springtime playing across a sketchbook patterned with all of life's up and downs. Your words are deep, passionate. And amazing. This is beautiful and your talent shines through brightly. It takes me around and back to the past and into the future. You have a way with your words that makes sense. That is solid and beautiful. I love it

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

christine zapanta andes

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot =]



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i loved how you began the poem with each intricate thought,but towards the end i got lost a bit as to what you were talking about but it's a nice piece overall. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this however I found that I began slowly and gradually losing interest I feel that this is because of how well you began this poem. But also because how the ending in comparison was not as strong.

Posted 5 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

5 Years Ago

thanks for the review :)
F*****g awesome. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

6 Years Ago

;)
I loved this, you did a nice job here ^_^ I enjoyed reading, lifted my mood at the end...

Posted 6 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

6 Years Ago

tinkyu kuroneko :)
Japanese Cherry

6 Years Ago

Anata no kangei, ur welcome!
christine zapanta andes

6 Years Ago

;)
An enjoyable read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

6 Years Ago

;) thanks
Very happy at the end :) great job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

6 Years Ago

well, thank you heromen :)
Wonderful writing! Really wonderful!

Posted 6 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

6 Years Ago

thank you :)
Nice poem :) the way you capitalized words was nice use, a very uplifting poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

6 Years Ago

thanks endless sea :)
This is beautiful.
You've done what I haven't seen much in my life.
Write a happy uplifting poem.
Well done! ^^

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

christine zapanta andes

6 Years Ago

thank you bluefire :)
Bluefire

6 Years Ago

No problem! :3

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