HEARTACHES

HEARTACHES

A Chapter by christine zapanta andes
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HEARTACHES

Dreams keep on haunting

Bald lyrics beyond the past

Still I, drowned in tears.


Thou arts foolishness

Untold sorry's leaped through me

Another lie’s told.


Little promises

Speak in severe mimicry

Uttered in silence.


Tickled light did spark

Within me I thought can bright

Vanished to the wind.


All that’s lie to give

Tormented and torn apart

Nothing’s left behind.


Solely true, I was

I exist to coexist

Yet inanimate.

Brought to ignorance

Locked upon a darkened room

Jested crowd of sin.


Inhumane gave learned

Tell the world I have my own

Earned to stand as whole.




© 2016 christine zapanta andes


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christine zapanta andes
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Now you gave me another reason to remember a friend and cry... You did great by having this poem speak another kind of heartache. A place where foolishness, regrets and lies exist to make your heart break apart. I loved the wordings and how they fit with one another. You're really good when it comes to that. Keep up the great job. :)

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My heart is aching in many ways right now, This poem seemed to intensify it....

Nice job!

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Heartache can zap the light that is bright within our soul. You conveyed an emotion that is relatable, it can feel like you are locked in a darkened room. Nice write.

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