LET ME BE

LET ME BE

A Poem by christine zapanta andes
"

I was lost

"
Soft tender lips
let be thy wine,
to your life's so cruel
may I be your shoulder?
cuddle on the rainbow
let days be ours,
so time passed care not I 
to be your history,
tremblin' as the wind
let me be your breath,
between your lies 
the truth be I
touch me not to my soul for
I afraid beggin' you to be real,
intertwine with existence
still I mere livin' a dream.

-musicfunk-

© 2012 christine zapanta andes


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Please sort out your grammar. Some of this is being lost because your sentences don't stop...

Posted 10 Years Ago


short but full of images.

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow, words in reverse format, taking life aback, great write!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like it a lot.

Posted 10 Years Ago


just lovely :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


really nice', a lot of imagery, really awesome..:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the second stanza. It could probably stand on it's own, even without the first six lines. Either way, it's different and cool.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Really nice, love the beginning.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow. This is great. I love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


deep emotions , well expressed

Posted 10 Years Ago



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