My ending of Narnia (The first one)

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Peter ; (Peter walks in) “ Look guys, we got a letter from Mum”

Susan ; Open it!

Lucy ; (Jumping up and down) “No, let me open it, I was Mum’s favourite.”

Edmund ; “No you aren’t, I am”

Peter ; “Lucy come here.”

Lucy  ; (Lucy runs over to take the letter from Peter. She opens the letter and stops)

“He’s back, he’s back, HE’S BACK!”

(Peter, Susan and Edmund stare at her)

Peter ; “Who’s back? Lucy?”

Lucy ; “Dad’s back”

Susan ; “He can’t be, thats impossible”

Edmund ; “No it’s not”

Peter ; (Peter scowls at Edmund) ; “Give it here, Lucy”

Lucy ; (Hands the letter to Peter. Peter reads the letter) “It’s true, he really is back”

(The professor walks in)

Professor ; “Whats all this noise?”

Lucy ; “Our Father! He’s alive and they want us to go visit them!”

Peter ; “We were just wondering,” (he stops and thinks about it) “If we could go see them?”

Susan ; “It’s ok if you don’t want us too”

Professor ; “ Of course it’s OK, if you don’t mind we’ll go... lets say, in 3 days.”

Edmund ; “What? We’re actually going?”

Professor ; “Well, I can’t keep you from your parents now, can I?”

(The professor walks out and the children go and get their things together)

Later that night they have dinner. During dinner, they couldn’t stop talking about how much taller their Mother would be or even if they had a new house, but all Edmund could think of was Narnia.

Edmund ; “What about Narnia?”

Peter ; “Narnia doesn’t matter anymore... It’s finished... It’s done. It’s all over.”

Susan ; “Peter, stop it”

Lucy ; (Lucy leaves the table) “I’m going to bed”

Edmund ;  “So am I”

They all headed off to bed, except Edmund, who decided to step back into the world of Narnia once more to talk to Aslan.

Aslan ; “Edmund, you need to forget about us. Your job is done here.”

Edmund ; “But we are Kings, we can’t just forget...”

Aslan ; “You will always be welcome here in Narnia, but we are safe now. The White Witch is gone”

Edmund ; “OK, I won’t come back. We will always be here if you need us, for anything.”

Aslan ; “Goodbye, my young King”

Back on the other side of the wardrobe, everyone is sleeping and before all of them can say Narnia, they were on the next train to London.

Lucy ; “Oh, this is so exciting! I hope their OK.”

Peter ; “They’ll be fine”

Edmund ; (Staring out the window) “I wonder what Dad looks like?”

Peter ; “I’m sure he will be as good looking as I am!”

Susan ; “Well, thats unlikely!”

Peter ; “Hey!!”

They all laughed at the jokes that Peter made about himself, but they all knew they were most likely true.

When they arrive at the train station, all the can do is stand there and stare at the man who is looking back at them.

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[Coyote Poetry]

I like ending to the story. Your version allowed the real life version to end with a different ending. Not so exciting. Thank you for sharing the story.
Coyote