Serenity (Draft 2)

Serenity (Draft 2)

A Poem by tmasse
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Personally I like draft one much better, it flows better and was from the heart

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Serenity


a Awake upon an evening of turmoil

b My feet tread away from sadness.

a Walking across soft turf, soil,

b Towards the darkness.

Alone,

c Breaking at the seam,

c Past artificial gleam.

b I stride with purpose,

d Away from sorrow,

e I raise my gaze

e To find the sky razed

f With the light from above,

d A constant glow,

f A sign of love.

Stars.

© 2014 tmasse


Author's Note

tmasse
I included the rhyme scheme on left side for you, it is a little rough

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if a broken heart gives you strength to write this beautifully i wish not to mend them back to together but i am not that unkind. love this poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


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tmasse

8 Years Ago

thanks, this idea was from before the heartbreak tho

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I am a 17 year old single male who has never been too invested in writing, however i believe there are some things that should be written and there is no point in writing if no one can see it. I am f.. more..

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