you are mean

you are mean

A Poem by Tomi
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give a little consideration, your words could be hurting the next person.

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You think it’s nothing

what you’re doing

only if you see the tears

flow from their eyes

whom you’re wounding

 

You think you’re just joking,

only that people hurt

who bear the brunt

of your comments

 

the hurtful words

piercing like a sword

 

the hateful looks

making them puke

 

the scornful jokes

at another s  heart they poke

 

the sarcastic remarks

hitting like a axe

 

you are just so mean

as though to hell you’ve been

© 2010 Tomi


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I agree words are more hurtful than actually getting punched or hit in anyway...when a person hurts someone with words...they don't know how to express themselves in any other way...they just think picking on someone is the way to make them feel better...but you never know what a person is going through to make them like that...they could be having problems at home that they don't know how to get through...they can't talk to anyone about it...you never know unless you truly get to know a person...but you can't get to know them all that well...they just don't want to get to know people before they start to judge. I liked this poem...it is a wake up call for most people. They should watch what they say to others you never know what is going through someone's head when you talk to them. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I agree words are more hurtful than actually getting punched or hit in anyway...when a person hurts someone with words...they don't know how to express themselves in any other way...they just think picking on someone is the way to make them feel better...but you never know what a person is going through to make them like that...they could be having problems at home that they don't know how to get through...they can't talk to anyone about it...you never know unless you truly get to know a person...but you can't get to know them all that well...they just don't want to get to know people before they start to judge. I liked this poem...it is a wake up call for most people. They should watch what they say to others you never know what is going through someone's head when you talk to them. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is true that words can sometimes be more hurtful than even a hard slap on one's face. In every situation, we must learn to control our meanness and learn to maintain balance between ourself and the second person with whom we are interacting.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I like this write because it exists in my reality. Sometimes, words hurt deeper than a slap or a fist does, good poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this one.. it is very true and i know what its like also. sometimes people don't seem to care if they hurt someone

Posted 13 Years Ago


NO YOUR MEAN! haha lol! I like this it's the truth sometimes people just don't have a heart. This is an amazing job! I like it :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a fantastic write, great strength in this peice

Posted 13 Years Ago


THIS IS HITTING THE NAIL ON THE HEAD...
WITH SUCH A TOPIC...
I LOKE HOW YOU MAKE IT SEEM...
AS IF THE PERSON...
SHOULD BACK OFF...
BECAUSE THEY HAVEN'T BEEN HURT OR BURNED...
VERY NICE JOB...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Words kill faster than any bullet. This a great poem, full of power to people who need to read it, and people who have been on the receiving end of the sword.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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