The Moon

The Moon

A Poem by Tom Chan
"

Nobody understands the Moon.

"

 

You are so scared
Your heart is pumping so hard
Sweats are running down from your forehead
Illusions scare away your sanity

 

You scream, you beg
You crawl, you cry
I stare at you with my shiny eyes
I whisper, I want you to die

 

A giant lobster swims ashore
Two silver dogs howl, when they see me
Two tall towers stand around me
Like two faithful devotees

 

The darkness blindfolded you
You crawl around like a night crawler
Listen to me, close your eyes tightly
Because you’ll never understand me

 

© 2011 Tom Chan


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Tom Chan
Hope you like this piece :)

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OMG! I love this sooo much!!!!!!(:

Posted 9 Years Ago


great work
it is a beautiful descriptive piece

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a great piece i loved it
mostly :
"You scream, you beg
You crawl, you cry
I stare at you with my shiny eyes
I whisper, I want you to die"

great work :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


The imagination is simply painted, carefully written... it adds a very personal touch to your poem which is, all in all, perfectly expressed.
The plenty use of verbs in the second stanza is lovely.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this, you worded it pretty well. The third stanza was creative, and my favorite stanza was the final one, good job on this keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Tom Chan
Tom Chan

Shah Alam, Malaysia



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I'm a writer, an artist and a lomographer. My favourite writers and poets are Neil Gaiman, Paolo Coelho and Laura Dockrill. I started writing poems since I was 12 and started writing short stories whe.. more..

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