White Skin

White Skin

A Poem by Precious Seconds

The world into purity
Along a lace cover

I saw your eyes
Staring at me

Your pull
On a vein

This heart

Cloud of blessing
Our act of breathing

My soul saw the light
Of a new

Singing through agony
Longing for your everything

Your fears
Made my chest thunder

Shudder

I held you 
Warming away a cold thought

Your fingers 
Fit perfectly into mine

As i lost a gasp of air

Tune into a life melody
We sat in a moment

No frame could hold

All handles fell off the hook
As you spoke words 

To never be understood

Telling words
Never to be heard

A language of sight
Speaking in white

Glowing into my hands
The smile i select

Across my red lips
You remain 

Upon a prayer
Raised to the sky

A song 
in me 

© 2016 Precious Seconds


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Beautiful and gentle use of words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Precious Seconds

2 Years Ago

Thank you C
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
These words are why we have a heart. All the pictures that no frame could contain, where the energy seen through the lens would only capture a fragment of a moment of its essence, that the mind, heart body and soul imprint so deep in us that it most likely changes our dna. Those fingers fit perfectly, only because they are part of set from the same mould, there is no chance or luck involved in perfect fits, apart from the luck of finding your mould and them finding you.But you encompass everything I say in just one line, the last...The song in me. Beautiful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Precious Seconds

2 Years Ago

He makes my heart sing ..... inside quite literally
Thank you Nemo .....
Lorry

2 Years Ago

You're most welcome :)
this is a glorious work of art :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


Precious Seconds

2 Years Ago

Thank you Terry .... this man is a work of art
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Great work there. It sounds like you love this person, cherish the love you have. There may be times. when you doubt that thsi person loves you. Light the candle of hope have it burn bright. Have a candle alight to send your love to you. Your heart is what you feel this in. It is beauty, your kindred words may they be read by your love.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Precious Seconds

3 Years Ago

This pièce is really close to My héart
Richard Patrick

3 Years Ago

Keep the faith. Love the one who loves you.
Curiosity, this is definitely up there in my favorites of your writings. Excellent work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Precious Seconds

3 Years Ago

Thank you Spencer :)
When a person sparks a song in your soul, that song will remain melodious for a lifetime even if the person is no longer physically near you. A magically romantic write. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


Precious Seconds

3 Years Ago

Thank you Dear Lydia
You reached for - and touched a star... and described it with heart.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Precious Seconds

3 Years Ago

Thank you Chris ...... :)
' I held you -- -- Warming away a cold thought .. '

Christina Rossetti . Neruda.. two great poets, created poems about love sublime.. and now you, yours. What stunningly gentle and sincere words you've given us... readers who need be reminded what Love means

This poem is absolutely beautiful. Sighhhhh

Posted 3 Years Ago


Precious Seconds

3 Years Ago

Oh my ..... Thank you so very much lol :)
emmajoy

3 Years Ago

You're welcome - meant every word.
gorgeous! absolutely gorgeous .. so delicate ..serene .. that great trust required for such a passion ..so many lines that stand out to me .. a beautiful beautiful poem says i!
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Precious Seconds

3 Years Ago

Geeeeee Thank you E
You make me feel like a shinning star
Merci beaucoup
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

i failed to mention the pic ..it is perfect with your poem ..i can dream into them long time ..long .. read more
Beautiful love poem, Curiosity. Well done. Loved it. :) Rudi

Posted 3 Years Ago


Precious Seconds

3 Years Ago

Thank you Rudi :)

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Added on July 23, 2016
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