A place of love

A place of love

A Poem by Nisreen

نتيجة بحث الصور عن ‪holiday cheers‬‏


In retention there stood a smile
Through sunshine and whistles

Cold mornings sit in warm cars
As the holiday cheers another year

I felt the love of centuries of dreams
Delivering a child of youth to something once old

I told you of stories along the stream
You took me tonight again to be seen

Tax payer entwined in proposals
Checks balanced the disposals

Policies muddled up in procedures
As words fly by the post

The games we played
Through new years mistletoe 

I thought the trees of Christmas lights were lost
Until i passed a doors sitting by you to cross

The stockings filled with laughter
Candy cane and my very here after

This year was a package of ribbon red
Something i once remembered and you simply said

For now and tomorrow we would forever write
Of life and givings we had hope

You wear a scarf of deepest grey
I know tonight i hold you to pray

A holiday of love
Not one of cries

The hot cocoa i owe you
The smile in my eye 

© 2016 Nisreen


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Very bright and clear. Emotions and serenity. Calm mood and all is realy beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nisreen

7 Years Ago

Thank you Martin
Soft, kind and needed words.
"For now and tomorrow we would forever write
Of life and givings we had hope"
The above lines are needed. Hope, kindness and concern. Needed gifts for the all of us. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 7 Years Ago


Nisreen

7 Years Ago

Thank you C
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome dear friend.
It has to be this time or year before we turn for a time, and remember others. Thanks for the journey you took.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nisreen

7 Years Ago

Thank you Paul
Beautiful Serendipity, I love the twists and the emotions you paint.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nisreen

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Beautiful festive tale with a unique twist of then, now and tomorrows, which is where all thoughts tend to lead as the years end ticks ever closer.Beautiful end lines.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nisreen

7 Years Ago

Thank you bell
Nisreen

7 Years Ago

I meant nemo
Stupid auto correct
Lorry

7 Years Ago

Ha, I've been called worse :)
so glad this ended well ;) i was uplifted just by the pic ..and as i looked at it a while i see it is in the shape of the crown of thorns .. then i read your slightly abstract poem .. each couplet its own scene in my mind ..then i hit the political and started to worry ..oh ..this is not going to end happy :( but you surprised me and all that is well ends well eh!? :) Merry Christmas to you my friend!
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nisreen

7 Years Ago

Lol
Merry Christmas to you :)
Your writing is an inspiration.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nisreen

7 Years Ago

Thank you that's pretty sweet
I believe it is a very heartfelt poem, I loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nisreen

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your words
MadWaffles

7 Years Ago

You are very welcome.

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Added on December 12, 2016
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