Pilgrims of a Thought

Within or without seeking darkness in light

The mahogany in teals of brown winds

Stars relinquish a backdrop of bright days

As this earth may sing a soft song in sparks

Paid to the oath of a light coming from afar

The heavens shall agree upon a place to meet

Warmth would find embracings of much found

As trees would shed tiny dust of pure red

Words would be this escapade open to seas

Lines of mistaken thought hugging this release

For bounties of love effortlessly stream

Longing to create a package of stars 

Dreams would lay in silence in his presence

As something once spoken of would sieze 

Opening the doors to fountains of mercy

He holds her world within his arms

Craddling all the colors in pilgrims of thought

As they both relocate existence from this borderless place

Discoveries of pure wine in an endless meadow

They live eternally by banks of floral fields

Campfires of the soul may lay a form of speech

As they know of no end to their hearts

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's amazing how well we can travel and explore with another, when love drives the ship through tender waters...
and we find new worlds of passion and contentment.
j.

[Precious Seconds]

Thank you Jacob :)

[Dawn]

A lovely poem about Pilgrims, who travel near and far in search of new lands to speak the word of God. And give new meanings and hope, love and faith towards others. As well as true friendships and learnings of new ways.

[Precious Seconds]

Thank you Dawn
Appreciate your review

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Pilgrims of a Thought"
Precious Seconds,
Writing about the continuous discoveries of life.
We see ourselves in the knowing, in the learning.
What a great theme of pilgrims of life.
Your poem gives voice to the light we long for:
"Stars relinquish a backdrop of bright days
As the earth my sing a soft song in sparks."
Without light there is no color.
your second line is sweet!
"Mahogany of teals in brown winds"
I like to think of this as a poem
written about a life lived in the
darks and lights with pain and
learning. In the end and through
our with thankfulness.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Precious Seconds]

Thank you Kathy. Much love to you

[Paul Bell]

It's amazing comparing the Pilgrim fathers back then, to the present movement of people, in what seems to be the same religious persecution. Though i suppose the new world has been found. Which doesn't leave much room for new pilgrims.

[Precious Seconds]

The idea itself of a pilgrim has been tainted
And discovery has been demolished
Thank you Paul

[Einstein Noodle]

well said ..love the colors and the love ;) our hunger and thirst for nirvana is not misplaced says i! the Bible tells me we are all born with a "certain knowledge of heaven" ... we make choices that feed it or bury it eh!? would that your lovers have their way ... very fine read for me Nisreen!
E.

[Precious Seconds]

Thank you so much E
i was in a daze writing this one

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ............... hope the morning and a little coffee will clear things up for you! :)))

[Precious Seconds]

lol
i am fasting .... but i will get there at 6:43 pm :P

[Einstein Noodle]

even better ..may your fast bring you close :)