Best of Us All

He wishes to be the best of us all

 

He wishes to scorn pride

He wishes to be kind

He wishes to compassionate

 

He does not see what I see

 

I see

     Kindness

     Compassion

          In full measure

I see

     Love

     Hope

          In his future

I see him fighting pride, even when it is his due

 

He is the man

     The man of my love

     The man of my heart

     The man of my soul

     The man to whom I give my ALL

Reviews

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THe format is interesting and the poem is quite lovely. Its so sweet how you feel about him. Thats how I feel about my husband when he does the dishes which is not often! Good write! Can't wait to read more from you! Thanks for the review by the way!
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[Phill Oz O'fee]

Your dedicational poetic tribute highlights most poignantly, the recognition of your partner's humility; that quality of being modest and respectful, which is indeed, an endearing attribute.

Fabulous write!

God's Blessing
Phill(ozofee)

[Michael]

Speaks to a humble man. Interesting format, normally I am put off by casscading the line around but it really works well her. Rather than take away, it adds to the work.


Great job.

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

i love how you show your love so well. great work. my girlfriend feels the same way about me. great work.

[Debby]

Enjoyed this. iwant one too!
debby

[James Takeo Panton]

u r silly