Tinkerbell

Tinkerbell

A Poem by Riley Justine
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Is Neverland my home or my hell?

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Sun shining in the west
The dark forest leaves beneath my toes
Branches brushing the tips of my wings
As the moon rises lazily
Fluttering from flower to flower
The stars lighting the pirates' path
Soon when the sun rises I shall return
To the house of leaves
Which I call mine
Where I twinkle in the brightness
With Peter Pan I find my joy
With the Lost Boys I play
Never will I take flight to leave them
Never will I leave this Land

© 2016 Riley Justine


Author's Note

Riley Justine
Tried my hand at something more airy and romantic!

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The story in the poem had a sad tone to it.
"Never will I take flight to leave them
Never will I leave this Land"
Hard to be the last believer. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riley Justine

8 Years Ago

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.
Beautifully written. No one would believe you're new to this sort of writing. Great job! An enjoyable poem. It brought back all the memories of Peter Pan I'd forgotten. Amazing writeup. Keep writing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riley Justine

8 Years Ago

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed
It's cool how you wrote the poem in the view of tinkers mind.
Correct me if I'm wrong but is there a wording mistake in the 9th line?
Good write otherwise.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riley Justine

8 Years Ago

There totally is, thanks for pointing it out, Zac!
Glad you liked it!
I like it, I like your dark poems also, but this, being more happy, is also very good. I like all of the imagery in your poems, your very descriptive.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riley Justine

8 Years Ago

Thank you, darlin'.
Glad you liked it

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Added on April 18, 2015
Last Updated on November 9, 2016
Tags: fairies, fantasy, tinkerbell, forest

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Riley Justine
Riley Justine

Alberta, Canada



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