Symbiosis

Symbiosis

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Says Love...
I will not be moved
by primitive hands
and cold feet.
I am the core.
The eye in the center
of this hurricane.
I am not an instrument,
I am the symphony.
I am not hope,
You are.
I am infinite,
YOU are possibility.
I am that, I am...
Always...all-ways...Love

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I am the symphony.
To have a part in it- is an honor.
Of this infinite Love from the I AM.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for stopping by, my dear
Symbiosis says it all . Lovely Lynn as usual.love the core , the symphony indeed!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Moon...what's truly lovely, is to see you by! Good of you to brighten my screen :)
I really like the idea of love being the whole symphony. It takes every instrument to make it work. We have to love the whole person not just individual parts, or it will never last.

Thanks,

Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Thank you, James :)
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This just left me speechless. Every line is authentic and profound. Like a tiny prayer. Oh my gosh, I love this sooo much!
I think the whole world should read this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

I am happy you liked this one, softly, and humbled by your review. Thank you!
You bring out such hope and brightness with this one. The eye in the centre is the sun, and we are drawn to it by the gravity of your words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

SF, That is so sweet of you to say...thank you...
This is sound reasoning and artfully crafted lines.
Too often we assign the love label to "instruments" and we call one instrument love and another unlovely...
Who would enjoy cymbals clanging over and over, yet in the symphony they are lovely...
I digress. You poetry was perfect. Simply worded, concise, visual, auditory, philosophical, condensable and expandable all at once.


Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, dear poet :)
Loved the starting of your poetry with such given lines:

"Says Love...
I will not be moved..."

I'd say, Very thoughtful & evocatively furnished poetry it is. Many lines're one of my fav. like:

"I'm not hope, but you are... "

So touching verses you've come up with. Seemed, you've curved your life with literacy (passion of words). Ye -- it's true enough that.. the love ain't want.. even it never wishes to get unplugged off the realism of its spirit (that does resides in someone's heart) so I guess, it's very productive line:

"I'm not an instrument, but symphony.."

Ye --- in love, one's instrument so the other's its symphony. Even the symphony can't be reverberated across walls without having the existence of instrument around lovearcs so how can one spirit without heart or the beat without heart? No chance. What a great tapestry of love you've painted on words! Excellent work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Adams, for such a generous review :)
Symbiosis. An essential element for love to work.

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5 Years Ago

thank you :
Sublime beautiful words here. Very inspirational indeed.

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5 Years Ago

Thank you Africa :)
beautifully done!

yes, love IS the core, the center, the eye around which everything else swirls.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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5 Years Ago

What a sweet review :) thank you so much for your visits. Looking forward to reading more of you, bu.. read more

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