"Inheritance"

Breathe...
the dream that sleeps
within
uni-verse, the song
behold
holographic will

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

I am amazed , you say so much in so few words. Incredible.

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If you're amazed, I'm smiling :)

[Wondering Mind]

You slay me with your mastery of brevity.
A quite interesting title; all that is, is of the Origin ( my take on thus gem)

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That is an amazing compliment coming from you, sir :) Thank you Wondering!

[An owl on the moon]

You truly do know how to weave enchantments. One can feel the movement of the breath, the awakening dream, the universe flowing in music and revealing the deeper places. Divine.

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Thank you so much, Craig...

[Inject Positivity]

What beautiful a journey it is to roam in the dreamy world of universe by your carefully chosen words dear frnd... A very thought provoking write...

Sincerely
Dhiman

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Thank you so much, Dhiman :)

[EvaThornburn]

Very nice. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.Eva

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Thank you Eva :)

[EvaThornburn]

Your welcome

[Woody]

twelve! twelve words (if you count uni-verse as one word. clever by the way) is all it took to start tongues wagging and poets fighting over which interpretation is the correct one. much like abstract painting. and that my friend is what makes your poetry so special.

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You're so sweet woody :) Thank you for leaving your footprints on my page!

[andrew mitchell]

What a way to start the day with reading this little gem like in our minds we have our own cosmos, somewhat inherited, passed down from which we grow. Nice brevity which makes you ponder on this write even more

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Hey look who decided to brighten my screen :) Thank you Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

you are welcome lynn ,your work is just a pleasure, even intimidating its that good! lol

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awww thank you so much Andrew :)

[WittyWonka]

You have a unique way with words. Holographic will is just brilliant.

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Thank you so much, dear poet :)

[WittyWonka]

You're welcome. Thank you for the poet compliment. :)

[dan]

lynn, I always love pieces that make me think, ideas scattering then merging in my mind to go after the deep meaning. Dreams so often are the basis of so many writes, and the reason is that it opens so many doors of possibility (insert idea HERE) that I know when I read this again (and I WILL) it will yield a different feeling, a different scope of thought. SO well done, lynn; this is being saved into my library favorites, so thank you for that! take care...dan

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Hello Dan :) Good to see your footprints on my page. I am truly glad you liked this one. Thank you, I am humbled by your reply, my friend.

[dan]

Leave humility to lackluster writes, be PROUD of this one, young lady!!! peace...dan

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hahaha Thank you, Dan :)

[softlyfall]

Breathe the dream, live the inner world, search in sleep, sing the visions of it all.
I have to wonder what you are like, to sit and talk with. Your thoughts are so deep and intense. I would venture a guess, and I mean this with absolute respect and admiration, that some people are terrified of you ... because of the clarity with which you see.

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Softly, I am honored by your response. Thank you so much, dear poet :)