clotted

My heart is
the poet
My mind is
the analytical

coagulated

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Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahha! the mind does get in the way of things at times ..no doubt about it ... at worst slows, even stops the poetic processes ... at best can search and find organization, more colorful phrasing etc. i like this poem a lot ..who can not relate to it :)
E.
ps i think your formatting is particularly successful ...

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Hi E :) Love it when you come to visit. Wish I couldn't relate to it lol ((( you)))

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ....back at ya!

[Ken Simm.]

Interesting thought process about thought. I like its pathways.

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Hi ken :) good seeing you, my friend

[A hare off]

Love the formatting of this poem and the message, so clear and evident in such a neat little package. We just need to make sure the heart has a "save" function. Great writing.

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Thank you :)

[JayceeC]

My mind is always jamming up, preventing the emotion from flowing fluently. My pathway is not as smooth as yours. It would have to have more jigs and jags.
I like this brief write. The visual at the end is an added little bonus.

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Jaycee! So good to see you by again. Thank you my dear poet :)

[David Scott]

Can we be poets without the mind? Never. Yet it can clot up and cause the heart to stop beating.
I really like this very much!

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Thanks again, David. Seems I'm a..clotted again for now

[David Scott]

We shall find rat poison then... ;) Funny how a poison can save lives though.
Cheers to inspiration!

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[terry smith]

and your soul is the spirit that sings!!!!!thank you for singing to us!! :)

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Awww...thank you, Terry, for such a beautiful review :)

[terry smith]

My pleasure my friend!! :)

[Ruth]

Such a concise and beautiful write...the path is often more than not paved with obstructions...beautiful!

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Thank you so much, Poppy. So nice to see you grace my page again :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice way to define the Poet. Not easy to describe a writer's mind and journey. Thank you Lynn for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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John, sweet of you to spend so much time on my page...thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the time and you are welcome.

[Adam Adams]

Lovely.
Seemed, the life's always full of analogies that work 'pon visions/thoughts drifted alongside. I find kinda simplicity in your words.. which's very eye-catching. Short.simple. & relevant. Wonderful.

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Adams, thank you so much. That's me, sir, simple :)

[Adam Adams]

You're welcome ;)
Yes, I do figure it all out through your stuffs. Simplicity reflects through whatever you comealong. Have at it! ;)

[~]

Ohhh Lynn, now you got me thinking what's worse: a traffic jam of the synapses or a blood clot?!? A mind and heart fueling the pen in different medians I must say. :D

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laughing...I don't know how I missed your review here but I did :( Damn pissed too cuz I could have laughing a lot sooner :))) You're so cute skittlesness. Thank you!