Gone

Gone

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And every night I stood there,

waiting for another sunset to catch-

but these voices in my dreams,

called me back, purging my skin

with their tongues, like washing of

my sins.

How could I not love him ? My wind,

the tossing and burning glory of

my entire existence, his eyes-my rain,

and his hands the soft caress of my

dark hair, the chaos of my heart.

I was alive. And now? Now all I see are

clouds, and my sun is gone, it tries to

whirl his flames upon me, but maybe I am

blindfolded by will...maybe I am gone?

© 2015 ...


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Boy how I know this place...
Oh, but I know you well enough to say for certainty you are not gone.
We need to learn to be whole and present even within a relationship.
Then, with our lover or without we offer our fullness to ourselves and our love.
A hard lesson to learn.
When we use love interest to complete us the disaster is inevitable.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

:) It's ok, David. I appreciate your thoughts and what you are trying to do, my friend
 David Scott

8 Years Ago

Honestly, just trying to be a friend. No agenda other than to inspire and be inspired by transparent.. read more
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8 Years Ago

((((((((((((you))))))))) it's all good, David :)
Very nice. Sad and heartfelt. So many emotions. You did a very nice job with this! I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful poignant write, gone encapsulates those feelings , heartfelt .

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

((( U )))) good seeing you Moon :)
Powerful and thought-provoking piece of writing.


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8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very authentic write about a deep feeling of loss.

I was alive...that says it all. Once you have tasted through love...
If you can..please review my story Lovesick.

Posted 8 Years Ago


' And every night I stood there, - waiting for another sunset to catch-'

When someone you love with every part of your body and spirit disappears from sight, tis as if you've lost your shadow. How can the sun make sense of that, how can anyone else?

Your writing is extraordinary.. tis real, tis special.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you my dear sweet Emma :) To have you say that to me, is special ((( U )))
emmajoy

8 Years Ago

Hug returned.
"blindfolded by will?" What a beautiful & astounding way to express the emotions of heart. I must say, very intellectual write you've come up with. Around the world, there's so much love, light and peace, though somehow, there's, of course, nothing "left" love, light and peace", but the stereotypes of "memories". I believe, if there's no love, there's no memories so quite obviously, the "GONE" portraying here the conversation of one love-heart with lost-mind .. what all spirit wants is love, but the love's lost in the midst of time so you ask to yourself:

"I was alive, Ah.. ohh.. was I alive?
What all I see are clouds, & sun that's gone... "

Wonderfully expressed. One of my fav. writes, after all, it's drooled with so much insights/envisions & labyrinths of ones mind/heart. Beautiful write. Great job! ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you, Adams :)
Such a deeply painful, introspective world you bring to life. These haunting questions burn deep into the mind and heart so bitterly.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

thank you, my friend :)
wow, i felt this one a ton....i felt drops of rain...and that strong breeze of memory.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Jacob. I'm honored :)
jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

you are a terrific, writer, lynn,

i get much enjoyment from reading your words...you .. read more
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8 Years Ago

Jacob...((( you ))) that means a lot to me. Thank you!
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Missing someone is really hard
somehow
you wait every night
you cant control it

and that is beautiful

love your write here
i feel like i am sitting next to you while you wrote this

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8 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
B

8 Years Ago

My pleasure :)
Have a gorgeous day

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