Reaching To Be Music

Close...you are, within the million

different sounds your voice just "is"

Where I could hear the music of silence,

and our thoughts of equality

The attractive sound lingers, to slowly build

on each tone, note, to get

thinking, perceiving, to be the

perfect stairway of tranquil melody

Reaching to be music, to be one with me,

in harmony, intensely...close

Reviews

[Pete]

I like this. "The music of silence". If only we could all do this. Everyone is too busy doing nothing.

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Thank you Pete :)

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm love the music metaphor ..you could go much farther with it tho ;) ... the intricacies of orchestration, time and lilt are endless ... i challenge you to do more with this girl ;) ... expand ... breath deep ... another encore please .. but hey ... you hooked me fast .. it is after all " Reaching To Be Music"
love it!
E.

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Hi E :) I could go much further with it, but then it would be to ummm, intimate, to be posted lol I love your visits...thank you :)

[Einstein Noodle]

awwwwwwwwww love you my friend!! truly appreciate you presence here

[David Scott]

Intimacy is found here. The willingness to be interwoven without encroaching. Yet, still able to peel away the layers and see, hear, taste the good of the other.
Few could do this well... But it is a beautiful mess to give it our best and dance to the music we manage to create.
Inspirational.

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I am honored, thank you, dear poet :)

[Karel]

i seem to like it without being able to put exactly my finger on why..

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Thank you for stopping by

[Cryingkate]

Nicely done as always......But what should I expect from an Angel? God you know how to use that heavenly pen of yours.

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Awwww thank you so much Kate! I am humbled :)

[wordman]

you are in rhythm with my mind ,in harmony and close..

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hello Ron :) good to see you by, my friend. Hope you are well and happy (((u)))

[wordman]

you`re welcome,not well or happy ,lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i've got the music in me, you have the music in you and together we have the music in us...the music of love....i really like this...not sure why the mature rating...

there is a sensual feeling from this, but subtle, not explicit...

it is beautiful

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Hello Jacob :) Thank you so much for your words and you are right about the mature rating

[Cryingkate]

Hee Hee..... You only have to rate this mature if you tell your secret thoughts added to it. LOL.read moreHee Hee..... You only have to rate this mature if you tell your secret thoughts added to it. LOL.
Ha ha i know what your thinking :-)

[Cryingkate]

I got cut off.. I also said... Ha Ha I know what your thinking ;-)

[terry smith]

You have a great way of expressing feelings of love! I really liked this!

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Thank you so much, Terry! I'm glad you like it :)

[Adam Adams]

Sounds astounding. "Reaching To Be Music" is one of the manifested title that speaks the cores of canyon heart... in words. I believe, musically the breath that one inhales or exhales belong to Music - the music that makes feet loosen up with obsession, overnight so no doubt, your poetry stirring the pleasure of breaths with music and its snores with hums (voices) ... kinda fascinating poetry it is. Nicely pen'd up!

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Thank you so much, Adams. You are so generous with your words, my friend :)

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-- oh, this is gorgeous poetry, lady lynn... -- you describe the beauty of intimacy in an exquisite way... -- i feel like i'm seeing a very intricate and rare piece of jewellery... -- this poem really is that ravishing...

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You're a generous feast of smiles, Serah :---) Thank you, lovely

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-- wow... thank you for the compliment, my lady... -- it's a privilege to read you... :)