Vivacity

Surreal morning tide

rushing wave

kiss for my love

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Concise, affectionate and powerful.
Impressive bit of work!

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Thank you, Jimmy :) I'm glad you liked it

[Wondering Mind]

for me it is mastery to express so much in so few words. Engulfing!!

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Thank you Wondering :)

[Wondering Mind]

You're welcome, lynn :)

[Pete]

Those 3 simple lines just took me away. I was there. I felt it. Captivating title. Leaves a lasting impression after the read is over.

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Thank you Pete :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Lynn,
"Vivacity" Title, poem's movement of ocean-tide to love's personal kiss all take on relationship to one another. This is a very thoughtful connection between. Thank you for posting I like it very much! Blessings Kathy

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Thank you, my dear

[Coyote Poetry]

You said everything needed in the short poem. Morning and gentle kiss. A wonderful place to know. Thank you Lynn for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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Thank YOU, John for staying a spell

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed my time with you and you are welcome.

[Bacchus]

simple, powerful, full and sweet.

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Thank you, dear poet

[Ruth]

Astonishingly riveting! Such brevity captivated the heart and glimmered :)

[-Scribe in Style-]

Very piercing. A simple yet sweet expression.

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thank you my dear

[Ed Hart]

another one, this is just great...it sparkles

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Thank you, Ed...

[James]

Wake up tp a vivacious kiss behind a rolling tide of emotion, who doesn't want that.

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Thank you so much James