Creation

Creation

A Poem by ...

Whorls beyond timeless

tender silken dreams made flesh

birthing universe

© 2016 ...


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nice very impressive writing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


A lovely and perceptive viewpoint, Lynn.
"Creation" is creative.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Nothing less than splendid. All God has to do is say be and it is according to my faith. His will is magnificent. Your poetry is marvelous. ...:::))))

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

And so is your review, Sami. Thank you...
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome ....::::))))
Lynn,
God spoke and it was so. The Lord said the word and our world became a reality. God became flesh and dwelt among us. Powerful truth within this beautiful "Creation." Blessings Kathy

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

nk you my dear :) Blessings to you
the beautiful dance of creation in a, personally, most preferred form of poetic expression. Deep and lovely.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you WM :)
Almost reads itself. So much said with a few choice words. This must have been part of what happened when God spoke man into existence. Great write for sure.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Hello Pete :) Thank you for stopping by
Shows that intense does not mean long. Passion undiluted.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Ken, always a pleasure to see you by :)
This imprints an image within...

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you, Chris :)
ooooooooooooo its the sinuous umbilical links that connect all things eh!? nicely done lynn! so much in such a concise package
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Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

thank you E :)
This is soundly visual, and it projects imageries that are amazing...

The last line I would say grabs my mind in a beautiful way... Lovely work frnd...


Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

thank you sir :)

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