Creation

Creation

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Whorls beyond timeless

tender silken dreams made flesh

birthing universe

© 2016 ...


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Nice use of words. Made to want to know more. Thank you Lynn for sharing your amazing poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

Thank you, John :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I was glad to have time to read your work. Life keeps me busy and you are welcome.
i really like how "words" play role in people's life. even sometimes, i get amazed to see the analogies of their depth... like when even a lil' character or letter of the word's changed, the whole freaking meaning is utterly distorted by means of ... "what?" -- goodness or badness. for example: your word: "whorls" sound more like "w****s" so if we change or follow up such so-called "CREATION", then let's see how it will or is gonna sound:

"W****S" beyond timeless
tender silken dreams made flesh
birthing universe.

damn! sounds so fascinating.. isn't it? ah.. originally me... b*****d! xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

Laughing....................
Shaking my head...you would
Nice, interesting write. I found it a pleasure to read. Thanks, so much for sharing.Eva

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

Thank you Eva :)
EvaThornburn

7 Years Ago

Your very welcome.
a new twist on creation,it sounds beautiful ,and effortless

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

:) thank you I'm glad you liked it
 wordman

7 Years Ago

my pleasure
Immensely visual - wonderful. A masterpiece painted with only ten strokes.

Thinking.. thinking.. eyes closed... somehow seeing an incredible light.. ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

It's the light inside you my friend :) I like it when you stop by

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