"High (lol) "

"High (lol) "

A Poem by ...

You've peddled yourself as a drug...

made me a junky you know, I suffer withdrawl

your skin resin is a killer buzz

and smoking you is far more cost effective

© 2016 ...


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Thank you for stopping by john

Posted 3 Years Ago


Honest, logical and amazing use of words. No weakness in the amazing poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Love is a natural drug. I had lovesick or what eva you want to call it. thanks for sharing this nice poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Inside druggie stuff morphs into an erotic cost analysis.
Clever, Lynn!


Posted 3 Years Ago


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I like your use and choice of words, pretty smart and effective, creating something that reads originally. Hm, maybe I'd just leave out lol in the title. I think high expresses it pretty well..

Posted 3 Years Ago


These lines are really, really clever! Loved how this came in as raw as it did: "You've peddled yourself as a drug..."

High on infatuation. :) Dope piece, Lynn.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

hahaha Dope review, Sante :))
Asante

3 Years Ago

My pleasure. :)
Cute. Sounds like a plan as long as you don't overdose. Reminds me of that old song by Robert Palmer - 'Addicted to Love'.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Pete :)
Ah the wit it rises as..... as other things do.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Thank you, Ken :)
ahh ! but the smoke just rises,it never fades away
clever write,you peddled yourself as a drug

Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Thank you, Ron
This love is smoking hot lynn!!! lol, a witty, cute write. Have you tried Coffee!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Andrew....Laughing.................. I love your lite spirit!

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