A Poem by treebeardgarden

Love your friends
Adore your family
Let them into your heart
For safe refuge

Hate no one
If the mean that little
Why allow them
Into your life at all

Live life with care
For those in your heart
Never allow fear
or Hate to enter there

Make your heart
As strong as can be
Allow only those
You love to enter and see

At the end of your days
Ask yourself only this
Have I loved those who deserved it
Have I cared for those that were mine
Will I leave the world a nicer place
Did I have love from other i cared for

When you have done all of that
The answer so true
Will always just be
Only after I met you

© 2012 treebeardgarden

Author's Note

I know my grammar is rotten and there are no rhymes but these are thoughts from heart.

I would appreciate any comments aimed at improving what I write!!!

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A really beautiful poignant poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on May 5, 2010
Last Updated on December 29, 2012
Tags: Loving, Life, Living



Kelty , Fife, United Kingdom

I am 53 yr old with 6 kids and 7 grand-kids, I've been writing wee bits of poetry and starting writing stories my entire life. Rarely finish a story and I'm hoping being a member here will help me .. more..