Abuse

Abuse

A Poem by Annie Nicole

It stabs you deeper inside than you could ever explain. 
It hits your nerves in a way that is uncontrollable. 
It kicks you harder in the face than anything the world could ever throw at you. 
It pierces your ears and mind with the loudness of negativity draining your any chance of a slit of sun light. 
These harsh and unfair beings don't care what they do, 
they just think of their own blackened souls that they want to grow to be the almighty power of our existence. 
Leave now, let go of them. 
Don't stay any longer. 
But if you stay, you will just be throwing away yourself in the fading world of the dark and scary reality.

© 2016 Annie Nicole


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I support your message here
only lately i realized some abuse is silent
its in a form of sending very horrible wishes to another
and people actually get physically ill

So when it comes to Abuse
Just say no
and protect yourself
and stay away
for life

i learnt that ...... strong message here !!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Nicole

4 Years Ago

Thank you!



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I support your message here
only lately i realized some abuse is silent
its in a form of sending very horrible wishes to another
and people actually get physically ill

So when it comes to Abuse
Just say no
and protect yourself
and stay away
for life

i learnt that ...... strong message here !!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Nicole

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
This was a very emotional poem. It was very powerful especially how you described the way It affects you. Incredible! Good luck in the competition.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Deep and true. Great verbiage and wonderful message

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem!
I love the meaning and the use of words!
Keep it up!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm always amazed at how most shorter poems are always the grandest. I am a huge fan of the first four lines repeating the 'it' to describe the topic as a despicable object in a sort, and then have it lead on to describe the results and consequences of said object. This with the mix of the dark tone of reality and the nice choice of words: it makes for a very fine piece that I am quite a fan of. Great job, Annie!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Nicole

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Honest and direct words.
"But if you stay, you will just be throwing away yourself in the fading world of the dark and scary reality."
Abuse, a hard topic. Some people seek it. I like the ending to the excellent poetry Annie.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Nicole

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Profound piece of writing that is sorrowful in itself, just for needing to be written. No matter the pretence of civility we live within, those who use and abuse others will always be found, lurking in the playground of life, like the bullies they were before. Beautifully capturing a sense of the senseless that invades our lives with their unwelcome attentions. Great job.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Nicole

4 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Annie Nicole
Annie Nicole

Peace , RI



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