For You

Take My Life, it is yours

You gave for me Now I give to you

You are all powerful I am weak

You are the foundation upon the rock

I am the house in the sand

Even when people look at me and mock

With You is where I'll stand.

Let Me Feel You Shine,

So I know that Your love is mine

I want to hear Your voice

I am begging, Kicking and Screaming,

I want to hear Your voice and know its meaning

I reach for You, Like a child for Your hand

Show me how to stand

How to climb out of the sand.

Author's Note

It's not finished. I currently only have my smart phone to work on so it'll be updated bit by bit. To God be the Glory!

Reviews

[Storm K.]

the rhythm in this is really good. Great description and it shows the message you're trying to put across very well. Nice work :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I really like this, it flows great and it's true. No matter what others say, it is best to stand by Him.

Great Job

[Lost in Wonderland]

Even if it isn't finished, it's a wonderful tribute to God's strength and the glory He deserves:)
God bless