No eyes

No eyes

A Poem by Trinity
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A small haiku I just thought of.

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A man with no eyes
seeing the world much brighter
than people with sight

© 2011 Trinity


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Trinity,

The depth inside these limited words is powerful and striking.

I admire writes that can make this much of a punch in so much of a minimal amount of words.

These words written bring foresight to all... and hindsight to many. Somewhat of a proverb in content, this would make an excellent work for one of the many contests for Poetic infusion Society. We soon will have a proverb contest; however, for the time being, it looks as if Enlightenment may be fitting.

I enjoyed the words and I appreciate your sharing.

Legacy


Posted 12 Years Ago


Trinity,

The depth inside these limited words is powerful and striking.

I admire writes that can make this much of a punch in so much of a minimal amount of words.

These words written bring foresight to all... and hindsight to many. Somewhat of a proverb in content, this would make an excellent work for one of the many contests for Poetic infusion Society. We soon will have a proverb contest; however, for the time being, it looks as if Enlightenment may be fitting.

I enjoyed the words and I appreciate your sharing.

Legacy


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very simple, but it has a wonderful message. Haiku, yes? I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For something you just thought of, it's very good. Simple, yet powerful in its meaning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 28, 2011
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Trinity
Trinity

Bavaria, Germany



About
20 years old, a big fan of books, especially the fantasy and sci-fi genre. I will firstly post short stories that I had to write for school and maybe later also stories that have popped into my head. .. more..

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