The Love that had to Leave

The Love that had to Leave

A Poem by Mortricia

A simple poem, from my heart. Anything true really is simple, after all.

A daydream is my sadness tonight
when I think of the love 
of the man with the red eyes
nicotine-stained lenses and old fashioned rims
I wanted him to see me
chest fielded in svelte, masculine fur
But he was a bad man
Mother said,
that he was a bad man
but I loved him, and;
I think he could see me.

© 2015 Mortricia

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A deep write, nice flow of ink, yur thoughts;re of high level i must say.
well penn'd.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is interesting. I am curious as to who the figure is. A powerful one ...a father or minister perhaps?

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on July 14, 2013
Last Updated on September 15, 2015
Tags: love, poem, lost, sadness, bitter, bittersweet, daydream, memories, parents, mom, dad, wrong




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