Determination

Determination

A Poem by Mortricia

blanketed destitution

not so far from bliss

so many answers

for our questions

no solutions

so, tell me this-

how can a flick

become a fish

without the clench

of an earnest fist?

© 2010 Mortricia


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That ending was almost too clever for me to catch. You even had me open a dictionary when I had no reason to. Concise, smooth as silk, and smart. Nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on November 16, 2010
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Get cozy to take a journey through a rhythmic, twisting prison, I'm a metaphoricalien and writing is my mission. "Didja hear about the guy who lost his left side? He's all right now..... more..

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