Emergency Escape Plan

Emergency Escape Plan

A Poem by Marguerite

Caps and gowns

Pomp and circumstance

How it felt when you said

"If you cry, I'll cry"

Dealing with a problem I wasn't built for

 

So how have you been?

 

Always waiting for the story to unfold

Knowing all my secrets untold

 

How do I feel better?

 

Ignorance is not bliss

And hiding it makes me sick

Without you, a wound can't become a scar

We're not as different as we think we are

© 2012 Marguerite


Author's Note

Marguerite
this is just a little song/poem i wrote. just starting to write lyrics and would appreciate constructive criticism :)
one thing in particular- tell me if it makes sense to you. i find it hard to distinguish the line between expressing what i want to express and laying it out so other people can understand the basis of the piece.

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It has really good flow. I like it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on June 13, 2012
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