Six

Liquid words that flow

Out of desperate lips

Vacating inhibition

Erasing all the grips

Lacerating the loneliness

One moment makes you whole

Venturing beyond

Every depth of your sole

Life that's like no other

Outrageous, a living dream

Veering back and forth between an

Everlasting slipstream

Lost causes with found reasons

Outlasting the insanity

Valor balanced with peace 

Captivating all of me

Literally, born again

Onto a life all new

Vast and so infinite

Extended here with you

Laying side by side

Orchestrated with all that will proceed

Very simple but it really is,

Essentially all I need

Reviews

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Well written poem. My regards. good.

[James Paulin]

I think you need much, much more.

[no sun]

what a well crafted poem. haven't read a rhyming poem like this is a long time and your piece is very good.