Synergy of Energy

Synergy of Energy

A Poem by Jerrytsuseer
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This is a rarity for me, a sort of 'free write' that turned out rather well, I think

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Patterns,
Like thoughts, flowing together, in a
Synergism of energies.
Hearts pumping, in and out, Diaphragms moving
Up and down, pulling and pushing air, in and
Out.
Rhythms of existence, tidal pulls of
Moons and planets.
Seasons and cycles forever changing, yet
Staying the same.
Nebular clouds of Dust, coalescing into stellar nurseries,
Birthing stars and planets, that will one day
Die.

Thoughts, going round and round, without
Apparent direction or conclusion, reveal
The quality of the mind, expressions of
Personality, both inborn and learned,
Concluded and obstructed by a civilization of
Excess and Profligacy.
Obfuscation as the norm, truth and clarity a
Rarity.
Patterns like thoughts, flowing together in a
"Synergy of energy."
by
Jerry E Smith
©8/12/16

© 2018 Jerrytsuseer


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Very lovely,
"Nebular clouds of Dust, coalescing into stellar nurseries,
Birthing stars and planets, that will one day" I love that verse, well done Sir!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Jerrytsuseer
Jerrytsuseer

Atlanta, GA



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I'm a working musician, I am 63 myself, and now I make a meager living playing music for people in Retirement facilities, Assisted Living and Nursing Homes. I also write (hopefully) inspirational poe.. more..

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