thoughts of you -2

I wrap myself up in thoughts of you,
a warm, trusted sweater for dark winters.
Seeking a comfort and warmth to curl up with
I sip from this steaming cup of tea, allowing
my thoughts to daydream - When will you
again make me feel desired and wanted?

Reviews

[Amit Mehta]

I liked the thoughts and choice of words. Very good poem. It could be slightly better with rhyming lines. Just slightly, very good writing.

[thetish]

Thank you for reading and commenting. I have never been able to rhyme well, but love to get out my emotional overload through writing poems.