Rehearsal

Rehearsal

A Poem by Ty
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Rehearsal

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I know why the morning air dares to dance with Dandelions, 

Horizons, and Sunflowers.

The gravity of graceful stares, etched in clock hours.

Time and towering Sparrows,

Native arrows of talons through space;

As if Maya Angelou would personally tell the solar wind why the caged bird sings.

A line between ivory and a black leaf,

Gleaming particles from the sun come crashing into the magnetosphere.

Producing dancing auroras in the night sky.

A poetic rehearsal,

A performance to repeat.

In the morning.





© 2018 Ty


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...I cannot particularly put into words the sublimity and mystic aura that this poems conveys into the atmosphere! This awesome! In assonance, musicality, imagery! You got it down! It flows with a lulling lilt that really makes the readers feel, and that image to go along with it is simply perfect (and divine)! Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Years Ago

Your review is absolutely amazing, conveying emotions evoked in you. So many thanks!
emipoemi

3 Years Ago

my pleasure.



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This is such a captivating poem. I like each poem has a beautiful image that matches with your poem

Posted 8 Months Ago


Producing dancing auroras in the night sky.
A poetic rehearsal,
A performance to repeat.
In the morning.

I love this part, this is a really good write here, I enjoyed this write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Now this is a masterpiece my friend! Loved every word and the idea behind this poem. You never cease to amaze me! Never!

Posted 2 Years Ago


The words meld into a melodic flow of perfection. I have the warm and fuzzies. Nicely done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ty the wizard is blending again. you may find words coming in eclectic places that are sure to please.....or by the way this is me.

regards,
al

Posted 2 Years Ago


LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! This is amazing! I love your originality & your opening line that harkens to Maya, then including her more specifically, later on. Some writers (like Maya) are so good, you just want to use a few of their words, even tho you very much make this poem your own! *smile* Your imagery floats on the breeze (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


Wonderful use of words and thoughts. I had to read again. Always a pleasure to read your work Ty. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Years Ago

As always. Many thanks Coyote!
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome Ty. I enjoyed this one.
Celestial beauty is stunning...a celebration of daybreak and night. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Years Ago

Kind words Divya, can't thank you enough.
The beauty of new awakenings where all is at peace and dancing in the symphony of oneness and peaceful spendor of unity- beautiful words🌹

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Years Ago

I'm thankful as I read your beautiful and poetic words my friend.
this is a lovely piece of work
I like the introduction of Maya Angelou
I like the repeat button and life of course goes on ;) very nice X

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Years Ago

Something I'd hope would resonate with many. Thanks so much!

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