Rehearsal

Rehearsal

A Poem by Ty
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Rehearsal

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I know why the morning air dares to dance with Dandelions, 

Horizons, and Sunflowers.

The gravity of graceful stares, etched in clock hours.

Time and towering Sparrows,

Native arrows of talons through space;

As if Maya Angelou would personally tell the solar wind why the caged bird sings.

A line between ivory and a black leaf,

Gleaming particles from the sun come crashing into the magnetosphere.

Producing dancing auroras in the night sky.

A poetic rehearsal,

A performance to repeat.

In the morning.





© 2018 Ty


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...I cannot particularly put into words the sublimity and mystic aura that this poems conveys into the atmosphere! This awesome! In assonance, musicality, imagery! You got it down! It flows with a lulling lilt that really makes the readers feel, and that image to go along with it is simply perfect (and divine)! Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Years Ago

Your review is absolutely amazing, conveying emotions evoked in you. So many thanks!
emipoemi

3 Years Ago

my pleasure.



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"Gleaming particles from the sun come crashing into the magnetosphere.

Producing dancing auroras in the night sky.''

These lines from this poem are beautiful! Thank you for sharring it with me :)!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Years Ago

I'd hoped to instill words of a more lighthearted root. Glad those lines caught your attention! Many.. read more
I like your descriptions. Each line feels inspirational, like I could derive an entire scene from even a single one.

“Native arrows of talons through space” sounds especially unique to me.

I enjoyed being pulled into this intriguing picture!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Years Ago

Too kind! Can't thank you enough. I'm always in hopes the photos will shed additional light in some .. read more
H L Rose

3 Years Ago

Of course! The photo definitly connects well with the poem and it’s great that the imagery in the .. read more
...I cannot particularly put into words the sublimity and mystic aura that this poems conveys into the atmosphere! This awesome! In assonance, musicality, imagery! You got it down! It flows with a lulling lilt that really makes the readers feel, and that image to go along with it is simply perfect (and divine)! Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Years Ago

Your review is absolutely amazing, conveying emotions evoked in you. So many thanks!
emipoemi

3 Years Ago

my pleasure.
Nature's proformanes are always new, never exacting. You have created a fresh look at morning

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Cherrie!
You have created a wonderful image. I loved to know why the morning air dances with the dandelions. ☺

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Years Ago

The morning also dances with you, Najam. So many thanks!
Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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