You Turn Me On

You Turn Me On

A Story by The Violent Wolf
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micro flash fiction

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I relish the instant you enter, dropping your clothes haphazardly on the floor. I get turned on by your very touch, the way you handle me. I delight in caressing your slender form, savoring every inch of skin exposed to me. I relish the complete abandon of your movements under my taciturn gaze. However, I despise the moment you touch me again, turning my knob, effectively cutting off the flow of water raining down on you.

© 2014 The Violent Wolf


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a very nice twist. haha. short and sweet.

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Violent Wolf

5 Years Ago

Hehe thank you :)
Very good; nice twist. I see no reason you should give it a Mature rating. Nothing offensive or purient is said.

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Violent Wolf

5 Years Ago

Thank you (:
This is very slick. The form is excellent, and it is very sexy. So sexy, in fact, you might have to slap a Mature on it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Violent Wolf

5 Years Ago

haha thank you :D

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Added on May 30, 2014
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Tags: clothes, gaze, skin, exposed

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The Violent Wolf
The Violent Wolf

Pascoag, RI



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I can't write well upon demand. I have to wait until a picture, theme or whatever hits me. I use real world experiences in my writing. Music is an inspiration. Some of my poems or whatever are random,.. more..

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