My oasis

The horizon is far ... the desert bare ... 

I am stranded with no one who cares.

Looking for an oasis nearby. 

Drained and exhausted I cry.

I'll find a way out. 

Sounding sure I hold my doubt.

Wandering in a state of depression.

Hoping someday to have learned my lesson.

Though I see it now on the horizon there. 

Standing beautiful and fair

The one I love.

Waving his hand in the air <3

Reviews

[Tex]

another short and sweet write... I wish i could get thoughts in a clear short concise style like this... I very clean write. I loved it.

[twinklestar]

Awwwwwwwwww ^//-//^, your so nice A-lot of what I write I feel in a moment and I just have to write while I have a "fresh feeling". If you get what I mean :D. I'll hope to write things a bit more complex soon >:3.

[Tex]

I just attempted to write something "in the moment" and just posted it. first try at a non rhyming poem as well so I stepped out on the ledge on that one :-o

[twinklestar]

haha :) that's great :D what's the title i'd love to read it :3

[Tex]

Carry You Through don't know if links work if they do here it is: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/NickRowe/1073460/

[mandy]

very nice. so many mixed emotions, but hope reigns at the end. i liked it.