Artifical Breathing

A short and sweet inside look at the feelings for a guys first love from a distance, and the heartbreak that follows.

Author's Note

I acknowledge that there is a typo in the title and a few other places. Swift typing does that, I apologize. But yeah, comment and rate it, please! :D
Also, this is fiction.

Reviews

[Wolfbaby]

This was really good! I've never heard a guy express his feelings about a girl like that. Is this what they really think about someone they love?

It's good that you acknowledge any mistakes in typing you might have made. That can be one of the harder things for writers to do. The ending was sad... I was like, "she died??" It's sad to think that really happens.

Great work over all, I loved it! :D

[nostal]

This is touching.
Dude, i just found out about triond. It'd awesome.