who are you

who are you

A Poem by deathtothewold12
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idk

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            Who am i

                                    who am i

                             i am a snak

                          i am a tree

                      i am a fish

                  i am a glass

            i am car

                                             i am a van                        

    i am a labtop

                                      i am a book

                                  i am a tv

                             i am a vcr

                         i am a shoutgun

                    i am a dog

                i am what i am

 

© 2009 deathtothewold12


Author's Note

deathtothewold12
some people told me to make it longer so i did.

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This was very nice. It flowed perfectly :) Great job. I love how it is so random yet makes so much sense, and there is the right amount to leave plenty to the imagination.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Quite short.... but it was good try.... what i liked was your last line" iam what iam"...

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 18, 2009
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