Mystery Love

My heart bleeds, my soul's been stained with sorrow and loneliness, how can I miss so much someone whom I’ve never meet before. I crave her love, lust for her touch, even to simply see her face would be enough. I want to know who this mystery girl who has stolen my heart is. I have never seen her yet I love her so much it’s unbearable. I know she’s out there some where, waiting for me to take her to happily ever after.

Author's Note

Hi! It's my first. Any constructive review would be fine.

Reviews

[JulieZee]

Ah, such angst. Hoping to find that one person that will be your one true love. Don't we all yearn for love in some way or another.

[Ruth]

I like the free form to this actually...there is a lot of room for this poem to breathe because of that :) The reader can really feel such depth to emotion :) xx

[Joshua]

I must say your poem is extremely good, with very vivid imagery. The symbolism brought up in the poem is very relevant and complete. Great job.

[Steph K]

Great continuity and flow in this piece. Its almost as it you are speaking your mind, allowing a window into your thoughts. Captivating.

[Brandonpaul]

sorry about the previous review. I'v been in that 'mystery love' situation before. And I feel like I'm the character in the poem.

[Brandonpaul]

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[Actore]

i have a mystery love too

[Actore]

greatgreat

[samhaiden]

Hope you find her.

[samhaiden]

wonderful poem. .