The Starry Map

The Starry Map

A Poem by Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor
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A thought on an aspect of searching for the perfect soul mate.

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The Starry Map


Hearts orbit inside their elliptic, slowing
In moments of perhaps-helion while knowing
Zenith and nadir feel suspense
Rhythms of caring indifference.

Existence fans an overlap
Laying out a sparkling, starry map
Between dimensions; this polar multiverse
Hosts sweet essence as cosmic dancers rehearse.

Emotional mass nor rule of gravity
Yields itself to this tender depravity
Where only shadows of needing
Eclipse care for honest feeling.

So learn better you nova stars
Endure not the distance; so far
Between caring and love the dark void is vast.
Do not settle for the lesser lest love be past.


© 2013 Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor


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Okay... I'm gonna go ahead and start with DAMN YOU'RE GOOD AT THIS! O_o You just make all my feelings do this thing... AGH, YOUR WORDS!!! :D *ahem* Anywho...

"Between caring and love the dark void is vast. Do not settle for the lesser lest love be past."

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Eyes sparkly? [check], tail wagging furiously? [check], nose cold and wet? [check and check] ... we.. read more
Emma Lee-Riviera

7 Years Ago

Glad everything's in order. :) Missed you!
Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Ghost: "...ditto!"



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a little gem of a poem,full of beauty, you nova stars...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Leslie. Why do you look so serious in your picture? :)
Well Done! Keep it up! Do u read mine 2 TIME and MANNER..if possible then gives ur review.. U can also add me on facebook

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind review, Lucky.
Gobinder Singh Dhindsa

7 Years Ago

Welcome
Very Well-written, amazing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, the compliment and your reading time, IHAV.
The first stanza is breath-takingly beautiful - I got the image of two stars stuck in each other's orbit...and the clever little 'perhaps-helion' play on perihelion in perfect harmony with the 'nadir and zenith' of the next line...very masterfully done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Thank you, very much, for your review and comments, Alvin. I sincerely appreciate your thoughts on .. read more
Yes, it`s brilliant. I imagined a holographic hovering of hearts instead of heavenly bodies, each on their own orbit, sometimes brushing each other, sometimes colliding, sometimes merging. This is clever and insightful. I`m envious. P.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Ah, there's Pete! {glow,bask} Thank you, thank you. You are too kind but your words are uplifting no.. read more
Okay... I'm gonna go ahead and start with DAMN YOU'RE GOOD AT THIS! O_o You just make all my feelings do this thing... AGH, YOUR WORDS!!! :D *ahem* Anywho...

"Between caring and love the dark void is vast. Do not settle for the lesser lest love be past."

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Eyes sparkly? [check], tail wagging furiously? [check], nose cold and wet? [check and check] ... we.. read more
Emma Lee-Riviera

7 Years Ago

Glad everything's in order. :) Missed you!
Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Ghost: "...ditto!"
Never read you before - I found this refreshingly wonderful - interesting juxtaposition of tender depravity. Well penned. You are a wordsmith

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Hi Tammy! Nice to meet you and thank you for reading/reviewing. I look forward to exploring your w.. read more
we are all stars, all electricity, all particles attracted or detracted from other particles...the search could quite possibly be a simple mathematical equation. If we could figure out that equation we'd all be rich and happy, huh? Great write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

I agree whole heartedly with your first observation and even the postulation. For some reason the th.. read more
I don't know why, but this feels like a jourey one should take, well done, good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Thomas.

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Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor
Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

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