Firefly

Firefly

A Poem by Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor
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A little micro-poem about searching.

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Somewhere,

Lightning bugs are mating.
Yellow-green lights, blinking...
Calling their soul mates,
Waiting.

© 2016 Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor


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i love fireflys ... if ever there were proof of faeries ..they are it ;) i watch a series on wonders in our worlds and fireflys were in one of the episodes .. and included their mating .. each blinking unique for each male calling out ..can you imagine such enormous ingenuity of design .. much like each of us eh!?
i like the straight forward approach .. you could easily have waxed more profuse in flowery imaging .. i don't think your poem needs it at all .. it opens a world in my memories and imaginations as is .. too cool says i! :)
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


I usually don't do poetry. It's too deep for a simple-minded person like me.

But I actually like this one. It makes me think of mating bugs, which is probably not the intent, but I got a good chuckle out of it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

10 Months Ago

Not all poetry requires depth-of-mind, some like this, just requires opportunistic melodrama. ;-)
Reminds me of
firefly love poem
I wrote years back.

Beautifully written
of lighting bugs seeking
their loves their soul mates
for life.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

10 Months Ago

A literal knife is also a subtle skill. I'm glad you were the surgeon. Now, to see if the insuranc.. read more
Fading breath I had when partaking in the zig-zag of loves calling... A nice reminder that hidden romance exists everywhere... Even for bugs, heh. Romantically penned...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

3 Years Ago

A leaf falls and you salute... you are too kind. Thank you.
Silente-Write

3 Years Ago

Ah, one must respect the smallest moments, even if the moment does not respect its own magnitude... .. read more
It's great! I love the way you made the poem about something natural, and it seems like that's a normal thing you see fireflies doing....

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
Not saying I'd look, but it must be a beautiful sight. :)
Nice poem, Tyfs.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading. :)
Cyprian Van Dyke

3 Years Ago

You're very welcome!

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Added on June 10, 2016
Last Updated on June 10, 2016
Tags: searching, longing, love, firefly, soulmate

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Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor
Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

Saint Louis, MO



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"My search for truth recently led me into an inescapable chasm of darkness, chaos and grief. It turns out I had a paper bag stuck on my head." ~ Henri, le Chat Noir. --- RR's are turned off. If y.. more..

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